| The first screenWhat a stranger sees before scrolling. | Puresome“House cleaning you can check.” | Wet Edge“Try the color on the wall first.” | The Hub“Benton Harbor, open for business.” | Grumpy Puppy“Official Uniform of the Morning Grump.” | Fronesis“Be the Company Southwest Michigan Calls First.” |
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| The buttonThe one thing each site asks a visitor to do. | Puresome“Get my firm price” in the first screen | Wet Edge“Get a free estimate” beside a call button | The HubA search box: a directory's one job | Grumpy Puppy“Shop the Mood →” with a hard black shadow | Fronesis“Get Your Free Money Map →” |
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| Getting a priceHow a visitor gets a number, or gets started. | Puresome“Firm price the same day. Nothing is booked.” | Wet EdgeThe color you tapped rides into the form | The Hub“See your page first,” free, about five minutes | Grumpy PuppyEvery hoodie $45; embroidery +$51 | FronesisThe price is printed: $3,500 + $750 a month1 |
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| Past workHow each site shows its work, and what it does when there isn't any yet. | PuresomeReal job photos, “not this sample” | Wet EdgeGenerated rooms, every one labeled SAMPLE | The HubOwners write their own page | Grumpy PuppyNine dogs, nine coffee orders | FronesisNo client work yet: a labeled SIMULATION |
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| ProofNo proof yet? What it shows instead. | PuresomeA counted checklist: 48 tasks, 12 photo proofs2 | Wet EdgeEvery photo marked SAMPLE3 | The HubOne listing so far — ours4 | Grumpy Puppy30-day returns instead of stars5 | FronesisA labeled simulation, not testimonials6 |
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| Where they workHow each site says where it works. | Puresome“Southwest Michigan,” in the first line | Wet Edge“Kalamazoo house painters” in the first line | The HubOne town, with today's date and time | Grumpy PuppyUS shipping, free over $50 | Fronesis“For Home Service Businesses · Southwest Michigan” |
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